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Sunday, February 15, 2015

The Battle of the Erathiel: Journey to Dôr Annon: Chapter 2: The Desert of Amdir (by Constanza Mayer)

CHAPTER 2
THE DESERT OF AMDIR
It did not take them long to disembark. There was excitement and hope in their hearts. They looked around for trees or any sign of vegetation, but there were none. Also for a river or stream nearby, but it was in vain. They had never seen a desert before, only heard of such places in tales. It was known that in those lands people lived in dire conditions. Their home had been quite different—green and with rivers, although their pureness and beauty had faded away drastically as the magic in their lands had as well.
            Bazur and Nurunn helped scout the land nearby. Even though elves possess a keener sense of sight and hearing, dwarves can endure heat far beyond humans and elves. It was not that they were ordered to do so, they volunteered. They took every step with no great effort, for the dwarf people are sturdy and enduring. Nurunn was one of the few dwarf women that had travelled across the sea. Sadly, she had been the only one to survive the journey and missing her friends and family was difficult to bear. Nonetheless, she was thankful that her husband was with her. They had married just before they left their home and wore rings forged from the minerals from their old home.
“Bazur!” said Nurunn. “Do you see the mountains ahead?”
Bazur stood only a few steps behind her and he quickly sprinted to her side. He was tall for a dwarf and had a friendly disposition. Being a young dwarf, his beard had yet many years to grow big and strong.
“I see them now,” said Bazur with a smile. “They do not look at all like the mountains from home. Look at how dry and red they are.”
“They seem to continue parallel to the seashore for quite a distance. Do you think we should follow them?” asked Nurunn.
Bazur stroked the bit of beard he had as he replied thoughtfully, “I believe so. It can provide us with shelter and also guide us through our journey. Can you imagine the minerals inside, Nurunn? The weapons we could make? The jewels?”
“I can,” she began with a smile. “Perhaps there are minerals that have not been discovered yet. Stones waiting to be polished by our hands. We could—” Nurunn stopped as she looked at her hands and remembered. Bazur saw her face change, her smile fade, and he took her hands in his.
“We will not let our people’s legacy fade, Nurunn. We have been chosen to carry out this important task—just you and I—and I am not saying that our people were meant to die that way or anything of the sort. I miss them just as you do. It’s just that I know that they are with us every step of the way. We can save what is left of our race because we are our race. We can do this together, Nurunn,” said Bazur with hope in his eyes.
“You are right. We can do this together. I know your heart suffers, for it is my heart as well. I just hope that with time we will both heal and make our people proud,” she said smiling gently.
Bazur embraced his wife and smelled the ocean in her hair as he replied, “We will, my love. We will make them proud.”
It was then when they saw Silme flying towards them. His silver wings made him look as if he were made of metal. They waved up at him as he descended a few feet and immediately they heard Thinidiel’s voice in their minds speak: My friends, please return and share with us what you have found. We must part soon. We shall wait for you. After he had delivered the message, Silme flew away back to the harbor. As he did so, he saw the dwarves become smaller little by little and soon he arrived where the others where. Everyone stood nearby the ship. Some were eating, others preparing and building the wagons for the road and the animals were calmly walking around or just waiting.
Among the animals stood out a majestic white she-wolf. She was great in size—enough for a grown person to ride—and elegant with each and every step she took. Her name was Faana and she was the Spirit Animal of one of the king’s sons: Valruin. Prince Valruin was the youngest of the royal family. He was a great warrior and the sword and daggers were his weapons of choice. His hair was long and dark like his mother’s, but his eyes were bright and silver like his father’s. Close behind him was his eldest brother, Camlhach, and he was grooming his mare, Tinwe—a silver coated beauty unlike any of the other horses they had brought. She was the last of her line, as many of their animals were. Prince Camlhach was quite different from his brother. He did not have dark hair, but instead his was golden and his eyes as well—it was a color known to some of the first elves of the past, before King Thinidiel’s time—and his weapon of choice was the bow and arrow, although he was a skilled fighter with any weapon in hand. There was not a single battle they had not fought together or where they had lost; they were their people’s pride, though they had always been a trio before the storm.  
“Oh, Faana,” sighed Valruin, “there is no grass to rest beneath you, nor tree to give you shade.” Faana looked around and then to Valruin who was searching his pack for the special food they had made for the animals. Luckily, elven cooking was very efficient and little bites could give you a great amount of nutrients. The dwarves had also taught them of their hearty meals and they had fusioned new food. As Faana ate, Valruin pulled out some of the fusioned food and bit off a bit.
“Who would have thought that one day we would be eating dwarf food, brother?” said Camlhach as he too feed Tinwe.
Valruin smiled and pulled out a satchel of the little water they had left to give to Faana. “This may all be new to us, but for the younglings and their children, sharing with dwarves will probably be one of the most natural things in the world. It is fine by me.”
“And by me,” replied Camlhach as he also gave some water to Tinwe. “I know we are not alike in many ways, but I am glad that we have them as allies and that we sealed a pact of friendship before the storm. I cannot believe that Bazur and Nurunn are the only ones left.”
Valruin took a sip and put his water away and Faana left his side to explore nearby. He walked over to his brother as he replied, his voice a little lower than before, “At least they have each other. Telwen is the only human left. Were it not that she has so many friends among our people, I fear she would be lost to agony.”
Camlhach sighed and turned to look at his brother. They both knew they could not allow themselves to become too attached to their emotions. Many found their people cold and heartless in their old home, but it was not that they delighted in having to suppress feelings and memories. The elves had always been misunderstood among other races, but with the last years in their home they had been able to show their new allies how they truly were. Luckily, the only dwarves and human left on the face of the world knew them and accepted them, as they did them.
Camlhach turned around and spread his arms as he surveyed the landscape and said to his brother, “Well, if this is to be our home, I shall require lighter attire.”
Valruin uttered the first laugh since their arrival in reply to his brother, strong and youthful like in his homeland, “And what would you require for this new attire, your highness? As you can see there is not even a leaf to hide your pale skin.”
Camlhach smiled and said, “There’s bound to be a leaf somewhere out there and you’d better search; otherwise, you’ll have to see far too much pale skin for your own sake!”
At the sound of Prince Camlhach’s remark, more than one elf laughed or a giggled, for the princes were known to have not only lightness of feet, but also of heart. Always a team in every deed as they attacked with such unity and might, that none had ever survived before their blade and arrow. Of course, it was also Tinwe and Faana who had helped them on their triumphant quests.
Valruin made a disapproving glare. “Mind you words, Camlhach. We do not wish to stir a fair maiden’s heart, now.”
His brother smiled, knowing that Valruin’s comment was not at all as serious as his face showed. Yet, he paused for a second, biting his lower lip as he looked back to the sea in thought. Valruin saw the look in his eyes, the longing, and quickly looked away.  
Thinidiel looked at his sons with a smile, for he admired their youth and light spirit, a trait not so common among the elven kind, and soon his eyes met that which was the loveliest of sights in the world. It was his queen and wife, Tin Nimtar who had been seeing to her people once again. She smiled at him, as if no harm had fallen upon them, no loss, and she made her way over to her husband, a beacon of hope as she passed by all Erathiel, illuminating their hearts as she held out her hands towards them, healing them with her ancient magic to give them strength and to take away their tears and pain. Her raven mantle moved gently with the hot desert wind, a dark and beautiful color uncommon amongst the Erathiel, for she had not been born among them. Her origin was known only to the keeper of her heart and he had unveiled it to no one.
“My lord,” she began with the gentlest of voices, “our people are hopeful and ready to part and Bazur and Nurunn are almost back. I believe we are ready for our new journey to start.”
“That is well,” replied Thinidiel, “The heat is strong, but the sooner we find shelter the better. Did you see to Telwen? Is she better, the poor girl?”
“I did and I feel darkness in her heart. I believe the loss is still very strong for her to bear, but Enora and the girls are ever by her side. Friendship and love will heal her,” replied Nimtar.
The king smiled as he caressed his wife’s face gently. He had always loved how small and gentle she was in comparison to most elves. However, the light in his eyes faltered but for a second and Queen Nimtar knew what had crossed his mind, for it was always present in hers and their hearts. She had reassured him that there was still hope and that it would be only a matter of time before they were united once again.
“Our sons look well,” she said with a gentle smile. “It seems as if the healing has already begun. Do not you think so, my love?”
Thinidiel’s eyes held uncertainty. “It seems so, but how can that be?”
Nimtar’s emerald eyes met with her husband. “It must be so. That or perish.” She paused only to touch his face, “You know that a broken heart is not something that I can mend, my love. Cry, as I have cried, but weep no more. I have yet to study the visions of the future, but one thing I truly know.”
Thinidiel looked at her almost timidly. “And what is that, my queen?”
She whispered back, “That nothing is ever truly lost if it wants to be found.”
It was then when Bazur and Nurunn had returned and all greeted them with happiness. Once they had reached the King and Queen they bowed and it was Bazur that spoke first.
“King Thinidiel, Queen Nimtar,” spoke Bazur, “we have scouted the land with Nurunn and it is as we suspected. The land is not difficult to walk upon and the wagons will not suffer the journey, for it is flat and smooth. There is both dirt and sand, but if we remain not too close to the sea, then we will have no need of treading on heavy sand.”
“We also saw that the mountains carry along next to the sea as far as we could see. Perhaps we could find shelter in these—a cave of some sort—and to use it as our guide along the journey,” spoke Nurunn.
“Thank you Bazur and Nurunn,” replied Queen Nimtar. “Now we can truly part and know that the road will be safe.”
Bazur and Nurunn bowed once again and took a step aside for the King to speak.

“My warriors, my children, my friends. Gather your belongings. We shall cross this desert of amdir, of hope, and find shelter by nightfall.”

About Chapter 2 and More!

Hello! Hola!

So, as I think, yes, I told you last night (I was almost asleep!), I finished the new version of Chapter 2! I'm gonna try and upload it soon to my blog :) I wanted to share with you a little bit about why I wanna write this book and any future book for that matter. I wanna change the world.

As you may know, but perhaps are not really conscious about it, art has a deep impact on humanity. Whether it be the beat of a drum, colors that mesmerize you, or words that support you. Art has a healing power and that is beautiful. I want my words and the stories I tell to touch people's hearts. I'm sure you will find universal truths and things that actually happen to us on a daily basis, but in a different world. How we overcome or problems, how it's OK to mourn and to love.

When I read a book, it's a process of adventure, self-discovery, entertainment, healing. If I achieve some of that, or all of that with you, then I will be content. I know how I can write a shallow book that will sell perhaps even more, but I don't care about sending that into the world. I feel that everyone has a great responsibility to shape humanity and their future, because we are the ones that mold the Earth. Also, if I become successful (although a dear friend of mine says that I should say 'When I become successful'), I would like to live off writing, but keep a part of my royalties to help the world through education. At least my country needs help and I know so many do and education is the key for our world to thrive together.

So you see? It's not all about me :) I hope that you too have it in your heart to want to change the world and I hope that you know that every person counts. As I once heard in such a beautiful movie and novel. "Cloud Atlas":

"Yet what is an ocean but a multitude of drops?" - David Mitchell

PS: I opened up a campaign because to publish my book and get a literary agent I have to present a great version of my book and for that I need to pay for editing. If you would like to help me raise that money then please follow this link, if not, your support here will do :)

http://igg.me/at/constanzamayer/x/9909696

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Bueno como creo, a si, que les dije anoche (es que me estaba quedando dormida!) terminé la nueva versión del Capítulo 2! Voy a tratar de subirlo al blog pronto :) Quería compartir con ustedes un poco de por qué quiero escribir este libro y cualquier otro en el futuro. Quiero cambiar al mundo.

Como ustedes ya saben pero quizás no están concientes de ellos, el arte impacta a la humanidad. Ya sea a través del ritmo del tambor, un conjunto de colors o palabras que te reconstruyen como persona. El arte tiene el poder de sanar y eso es hermoso. Quiero que mis palabras y las historias que cuente toquen los corazones de los demás. Estoy segura que encontrarán verdades universales y cosas cotidianas dentro de este mundo mágico que escribo. Como superar los problemas y como no hay problema en llorar y amar.

Cuando leo un libro, para mi es un proces de aventura, auto descubrimiento, entretención, sanación. Si es que logro es con ustedes a través de mi libro entones estaré más que contenta. Yo se como escribir un libro superficial que seguramente vendería más pero eso no me interesa y no quiero entregarle algo así a la humanidad. Siento que todos tenemos la habilidad y responsabilidad de formar a la humanidad y su futuro porque somos los que moldeamos a la Tierra. Si es que soy exitosa (o como mi querida amiga dice que debería decir "Cuando sea exitosa") me gustaría vivir de la escritura pero mantener parte de mis regalías para ayuda al mundo a través de la educación. Por lo menos mi país necesita ayuda y la educación es esencial para ayudar a nuestro mundo crecer juntos.

Ven? No se trata sólo de mi :) Espero que ustedes también sientan en su corazón la necesidad de cambiar al mundo y que todos somos importantes. Como una vez escuché y leí en una hermosa película y novela, "Cloud Atlas":

"¿Qué es el océano sino una multitud de gotas?" - David Mitchell

PD: Para poder publicar mi libro debo buscar un agente literario y mi trabajo tiene que estar impecable, para ello necesitan editarlo lo cual cuesta bastante dinero. Si les gustaría apoyarme monetariamente, favor seguir el hipervínculo, sino agradecería su apoyo no monetario de todas maneras :)

http://igg.me/at/constanzamayer/x/9909696

Friday, February 13, 2015

FYI (Para su información)

Hello everyone! Hola a todos!

I've been busy rewriting Chapter 1 (adding new characters and info). I hope you like the changes I made. The chapter's a little shorter now, but it doesn't mean that the rest of it will disappear, it'll just appear in the next chapter. Also, when I pasted it on to my bookmaker it shows that what I rewrote is about 8 pages, so that's good. Anyway, hope you like the NEW Chapter 1. If not, you may send me a private message with some feedback if you like. Hugs and thanks for your time and support! grin emoticon

He estado ocupadísima reescribiendo el Capítulo 1 (agregando personajes nuevos e información). Espero que les gusten los cambios que he hecho. El capítulo es más corto ahora pero no significa que lo que antes era parte de el desapareció. No, saldrá en el otro capítulo. También cuando lo pegué en mi programa para hacer libros mostraba que lo que les voy a compartir ahora es de 8 páginas. Bueno, espero que les guste el NUEVO capítulo 1. Sino, me pueden mandar un mensaje por privado y agradeceré su opinión. Abrazos! Gracias por su tiempo y apoyo!

The Battle of the Erathiel: Journey to Dôr Annon: Chapter 1: Dôr Annon (REWRITE)

CHAPTER 1
DÔR ANNON
Across the sparkling Enchanted Sea sailed a gray ship whose white sails shone like flames of pure light. Its stature and beauty was great and seldom seen by the eyes of mortals. Beautiful and sad were those who sailed upon it, bright were their eyes and their locks of hair long. The company was of elves who belonged to an ancient race: the Erathiel. They were greatly known in their lands as skilled warriors, wise, and immortal—a common trait among the elven kind, but due to their different origins, a mixture of elven races, they possessed skills that were quite different from their ancestors.
Among them were also those of mortal blood—the few that had survived the voyage and the storm. Not all had perished from the darkness that had spread over the land they had once called their home. There were two dwarves, Bazur and Nurunn—husband and wife—and a human child, a little girl they had named Telwen at birth, meaning in the elvish tongue: the last woman. They were a curious sight among the Erathiel. The dwarves barely reached the tallest elf at midbody, which was the usual height for the dwarven people, and the little girl was the same height, as well. They were all that was left of their mortal race.
It was only when the first lights of morning were being gently kindled upon the land that the ship came to the harbor. Who had built the harbor was a complete mystery to them. Yet it stood there, lonely, but true. It had been heard that near the ends of the world there was a new land—wild and untamed—so surely it must have inhabitants, they thought. Many had braved the sea’s might and perished seeking this new land for a promise of a brighter path, but there were always some that the Lord of the Sea favored and allowed to pass, almost always at a price. The Erathiel were skilled sailors, but the journey had been rough and the Lord of the Sea had claimed more than one life. The ship’s sails, once flawless and smooth, shone bright, but carried the scars of the winds that attacked that night.
On the mast of the ship sat a silver bird who scouted above and below—his eyes were a penetrating black. It surveyed the land without movement but with the patience that only those of many lifetimes show; a symbol of beauty and stealth. Two elves dressed in gray, each with a thin rope in their hands, tied one end to the ship and the other to the harbor. To the untrained eye the rope seemed easy to cut or break, but having been made with the warrior hands of the Erathiel it could survive a tempest. Their eyes looked to the land they had come to and only confusion could be found in those deep pools of light. The idea of this new land had not been of a deserted one, but of one where they could begin anew—where they could cultivate their home once more.
A significantly tall elf with the build of a warrior, dressed in shades of grey and green, stepped onto the deck. His eyes fell on the two that had tied the ship to the harbor and he thanked them with a gentle nod. His name was Thinidiel, Lord of the Erathiel, keeper of their ancient ways. He had led them into battle a thousand times and saved them from death just as well. He had also led them on this voyage, this search for a new home, not to wander or be lost at sea. Thinidiel looked to the mast where the silver bird kept watch and like a swift cloud he came down and sat on his shoulder—the bird’s wings and its master’s hair the same bright silver color.
“Silme,” said Thinidiel gently to the bird as he pulled out a treat from a hidden pocket. Silme gave a gentle bow before accepting it and remained on the elven king’s shoulder as he fed.
The Elf King looked away from the ship towards this new deserted land and spoke with slight disappointment, “Far have we strayed from that which we had hoped to find, my friend.” Silme looked into his eyes as if trying to give him comfort, for it had not been a pleasant journey to withstand.
Just when they all thought that the journey had come to its end, they were struck by a terrible storm that took the life of many Erathiel, humans, and dwarves, for it had not been only one ship that had sailed to find a new world, but three. The wind and the waves, the lightning and rain, had destroyed one and separated them from the other. Some had lost their lives before the ship had fallen and some as it was torn apart and sucked into the depths of the sea. Silme had spread his wings wide to shield them from harm, but he could not save them all. More than one had asked themselves why the Lord of the Sea had not claimed their life and why it took their brothers and sisters with such cruelty. They had all shed their tears, but the elves were the ones to wipe theirs first, for their race—since the first elf walked on the face of the Earth—is doomed to die from sadness. Should they give into the pain of loss, heartbreak, their lives would come to an end with no sword’s aid. How they envied the mortals’ ability to cry and not die.
Thinidiel walked among his people, greeting them all with what happiness he could muster. Everyone had lost someone, but he knew he had to help them by standing strong, by encouraging them to look towards a brighter future and the hope of the lost ship returning to them. At times he would look away into the sea with a glimmer of hope in his silver eyes.
It was then, when he looked away from the sea and back to the ship, that his eyes met two little green ones. It was Telwen, the young human girl, standing right in front of him. She looks so fragile, he thought. To think that she is the only human left. How lonely her heart must be. She is just like my little girl was.
Telwen looked up at the elven king, his height immense in comparison to hers. She looked paler than usual and under her eyes rested dark shadows. Thinidiel approached her and kneeled so as to meet her eyes—the King had always been humble with all he met. Telwen lowered her eyes from his silver ones and hugged her arms.
“You are shivering, Telwen,” spoke the King, “Do you feel ill, child?”
Telwen still looked away from the king as she answered with hesitation, “I do not know, King Thinidiel.”
“May I look into your eyes?” asked he.
Telwen hesitated once more, but slowly began to turn her face towards him until their eyes met. He looked into them with deep concentration, as well as all of her face and hands. She does looks ill, but it must be from all she has suffered, he thought.
“You are only worn out from the journey, Telwen. Please rest in one the wagons when we part and eat well.” He gave her a warm smile as he rose to stand once again—his silver hair moving gently along with him.
“Thank you, King Thinidiel. I will,” replied Telwen as she too got up and walked towards a group of young elves.
There were still many inside the ship, including animals—horses, tamed wolves, and hunting birds. Some had remained on deck during most of the journey and others below in their cabins. Never before had the elves built ships so large, but they were meant to carry what was left of their world. Whether they stood above or below, they all wanted to step out of the ship and to walk on the new land they would call their home. One by one, beast or not, they came up to the deck and looked upon the new land. They stopped once their eyes fell on the landscape. It was nothing, but an endless dry desert. Afar there were mountains, but there was not grass to walk upon. King Thinidiel, noticing the surprise in their eyes, the concealed disappointment, stood before his people and spoke out.
“My people,” he began, “my friends, do not be discouraged by what lies ahead. Yesterday we had no land to walk upon, but today we have been given the chance to walk once again. Think not of this desert as the end, but the beginning of our greatest adventure. From this moment this land shall be known as Dôr Annon, for it is a land where many doors shall open before us.”
The Erathiel, the dwarves, and Telwen—even the animals—seemed mesmerized by the Elven King’s words. Among them stood an elf of lesser height than some, though their heights were varied, who was cloaked in robes of indigo and deep green. Her eyes were a beautiful emerald color and her skin was light and had a glow about it like moonlight. She was Queen Tin Nimtar, wife to King Thinidiel, and his partner in all manners. She had been walking among them, seeing to their needs, and their hearts. She had a special touch, for with simply holding one’s hand she could take away their greatest sorrow. Whether she stored this sorrow or if she simply eliminated it from the world, was unknown to all, but she seemed always calm and collected—even when facing a loss of her own.
“And so it shall be,” spoke Queen Nimtar as she approached her husband, taking his hand. “We shall walk upon this earth, we shall search and we will find. Do not fear, for you are not alone.”
Thinidiel’s face shone with pride as he watched his wife speak and as their eyes met she returned his smile. Together they turned around to be the first to walk down to the harbor and to step on the desert sand. Everyone else followed.

Tuesday, February 10, 2015

New Changes/ Nuevos Cambios

Hi everyone! Hola a todos!

More than 900 likes ok Facebook? Wow! Thank you! Been working on rewriting Chapter 1 of "The Battle of the Erathiel: Journey to Dôr Annon". So far, so good. We've got new characters, a human girl named Telwen, and two dwarves, Bazur and Nurunn (husband and wife), which did not exist before. I'm looking forward to this evolution of my work and I hope by the end of the year I'll have published it :) Thanks for your support!

Mas de 900 likes en Facebook? Wow, gracias! He estado trabajando en reescribir el Capítulo 1 de " La Batalla de los Erathiel: Viaje a Dôr Annon". Hasta ahora voy bien. Tenemos nuevos personajes como Telwen, una niña humana, y Bazur y Nurunn, esposo y esposa, que son enanos. Estoy bien emocionada con esta evolución de mi libro y espero haberlo publicado antes de fin de año :) Muchas gracias por su apoyo!

Sunday, February 8, 2015

The Battle of the Erathiel: Journey to Dôr Annon: Prologue

Prologue

T
he storm was the fiercest they had ever beheld. It was wave against wave and wave against ship. Dark clouds poured brutally on the decks of the three ships, blinding those aboard who tried their best to stand their ground and to aid one another. The wind blew so hard that the once true white sails were ripped apart and hung eerily from above. All aboard despaired, but did their part. Some helped evacuate water so it would not sink their ships, others looked after the wounded, and a few were brave enough to swing from one ship to another to aid their brethren under the rain.
It was then when a wave rose as high as a mountain and fell with the intensity of a thousand blows. The sound of the crashing waves was that of many voices crying out all at once—then came absolute silence. Those who sailed on the other two ships looked upon the one that had been shattered by the brutal wave. Sadly, they had been drifted apart and could not come to their immediate aid. The cries of help began and those who were safe despaired with no sail to take them to their friends. The captains on each ship ordered to row and they did. They used all the strength they could muster to reach their kin. Some even jumped from the ships to swim to their aid, but as they got closer the sea acted once again.
Almost as if by an invisible hand one of the ships was pushed away from the others and was unable to fight back against the mysterious force. Dark shadows moved over the water and even climbed up to the remaining ship to taunt those inside. Those aboard fought them off with weapons—swords, daggers, axes, bows, and arrows—others with incantations or with prayer until they left them to their misery. However, none of this stopped them, their rowing, and they were nearer and nearer to their brethren. But upon reaching them something happened that marked their lives forever.
As they reached the remains of the ship and those who swam for help, darkness grew below them. Like a swirling watery cloud it began to spin and take all those in the water with it. They cried out for help, in pain, with a fear in their eyes that made all who watched shiver with it. They threw ropes and reached out their hands and the ship’s oars, but all was useless. In a matter of seconds what was left of the ship and the crew was sucked into the sea, but the ship next to it stood unharmed.
They looked at one another with tears and broken hearts. What could they do now amidst the storm? One ship gone and one ship destroyed.


Saturday, February 7, 2015

Changes!

Hi everyone! Great news! I am redesigning part of the story. I'm adding new characters and new places in hopes of making the story more interesting and engaging. I hope that those of you who already have ready Chapters 1 and 2 like the new way the story is going to be told. Thanks for all your support and I hope to get this published soon so you may also have your official copy.

BTW, since I haven't finished the book yet, as soon as I do I shall send it to literary agents to try and get it published traditionally but meanwhile it should also be available to buy in English. Editorials are in charge of translation and all that, but if I do that on my own, it'll take a while. Any language requests? What's yours?

Hugs!

Hola a todos! Más que nada quería compartir que estoy rediseñando mi libro, agregando personajes nuevos y esperando que todo resulte súper. No me queda tanto por terminar pero si retocar. Apenas lo tenga lista y editado lo voy a auto publicar mientras busco algún agente literario para poder publicar con editorial :) y veré el tema de la traducción también para que puedan leerlo. Este es un proceso largo y agotador pero se que tendrá su recompensa. Me haría súper feliz que les gustase pero sino es así por lo menos habré logrado mi meta de terminarlo :)

Saludos y gracias por su apoyo constante!