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Sunday, December 10, 2017

The Battle of the Erathiel: Across the Enchanted Sea: Chapter 6: The Journey

The morning air sank in and the cold of night slowly went away. Turion stood by the threshold of the cave watching the night turn into day. The sun’s rays began to spread across the sky, painting it a shade of magenta and light blue, the sand’s gray color turned golden, and light began to reach the mountainside. He watched the waves pull back and return, yet bringing nothing back with them. No one had asked him to guard the doors, but he had wanted to.
He turned to look back into the cave. Nimtar tended to her garden and all the life she had grown within it—many elf children helped and learned from her—the princes and princess sat with a group enjoying breakfast, but Thinidiel was nowhere in sight. Ever since the storm, they had barely spoken, not that they had a solid friendship before, but things were different. At times, he wished he had never followed that order.
“Good morning, Turion,” said Thinidiel who approached him from outside the cave.
“Good morning, my Lord,” replied Turion, slightly surprised he was outside.
Thinidiel reached the cave entry, but instead of going inside he stood next to Turion and also looked at the sea. “The day has just begun,” he said with slight reassurance.
“It has,” nodded Turion. He kept his eyes on the sea, but after a few seconds he stopped leaning on the wall and turned to the cave. “I should help preparing things.”
“Turion,” said the King before the young elf warrior could leave. “Thank you.”
Turion stopped in his tracks as he felt the King’s words. “There is nothing to thank, my Lord. I was only doing my duty.” He bowed quickly and entered the cave.
Lothar was among the first ready to part. He had not much to pack and he had also helped a few others do so. He knew that it was not safe to linger even though there had been no other attack since the last, but if his long years had taught him anything, it was that evil never rests, so neither could they. He looked towards the entry of the cave and found his king. He had seen him go out in the middle of the night and had not returned until now. Silme had been on his shoulder, yet he was not anymore. Perhaps that was the reason why they had not yet parted, thought Lothar. Unlike his elven companions, he had needed to sleep in the night, but only a little, being half-elven allowed him to need very little sleep to regain his strength.
He looked over at Bazur and Nurunn, they had also gotten up early and were helping the queen with the harvest of her magical plants. Lothar smiled as he saw them laugh and talk. They were lucky to have each other, he thought. Whether by fate or not, the three of them carried what was left of the dwarves of Eidelvar. Houses Torzak, Urzak, and Norozak running through their veins. Although, at times he did not know if to consider himself a dwarf or even an elf. It was not common in their lands for their races to mix, but after the war many things had changed and some for the better. His mother and father had met long before the war.
“Morning, blossom,” said Turion breaking Lothar’s thought as he passed by his side.
“Turion,” he replied with a sigh, shaking his head.
“Sleep well?” asked Turion as he also helped pack.
“Yes, thank you,” replied Lothar, expecting a joke or some sort of childish mockery.
“That is good,” said Turion without mocking him.
“And you?” Lothar found himself asking before he remembered that elves do not need to sleep.
Turion stopped packing and looked at Lothar, but instead of laughing at him he just smiled and shook his head as he walked away.
“My king,” said Lothar as he approached Thinidiel. “Our people are almost ready to part. Some are still harvesting the trees and packing, but we all have fed and rested. We are ready when you are.”
“Thank you, Lothar,” said the king turning to face him. “But I believe that we shall not be parting as soon as I expected—at least not all of us.”
Before Lothar could ask what he meant, Silme came into the cave and sat on Thinidiel’s shoulder. He seemed to be listening to Silme, though Lothar could not hear the bird’s voice. Nimtar looked over at Thinidiel and, once their eyes met, called her children to approach their father. Lothar stepped aside even though nobody asked him to, it seemed that the matter might be private, but the queen gave him a reassuring look that he was in nobody’s way. Valruin and Camlhach looked anxious, but controlled to hear their father’s news, the queen as calm as ever with Telwen at her side. King Thinidiel looked at his family and placed each one of his hands on his sons’ shoulders.
“Silme has found life,” said the king with a smile.
“Life?” asked Valruin, suspicious. “Father, what kind of life?”
“People,” said Thinidiel. “Humans living on top of this mountain.”
They looked at each other with surprise, but Telwen seemed most shocked by the news. There were humans left in the world and she was no longer the only one. It had been the loneliest of ideas. She did not want to be the last of anything. Telwen smiled a little, but not too brightly, for she still did not feel fully recovered from the voyage and nightmares had not allowed her to sleep well at all.
“You mean,” began Telwen a little higher than a whisper. “That I am not the only human left?” The news seemed far too great to be real.
“Aye, Princess,” said Camlhach beaming at Telwen. “You are not the only human left.”
Telwen smiled and could not help to embrace her father and bury her face in his stomach. Thinidiel smiled as he stroked her head lovingly. “Thank you, Father,” she said, “and thank you, Silme.” The silver bird bowed its head ceremoniously and sang a sweet and short tune for her.
King Thinidiel took his wife’s hand and Telwen’s as he walked further into the cave for everyone to see. “My fellow Erathiel and dwarf friends,” he began. “I went out to scout the land with Silme early this morning. Sadly, we saw no sign of the Princess’ ship but that does not mean we will cease to hope and search.”
“Nevertheless,” he continued. “Though my eyes can see far there are places I cannot see and with that Silme has been a most gracious ally. He has found something that seems almost impossible: life on top of this mountain, human life.” The elves and the dwarves awed at the news.
“The mountain’s magic seems to be aiding not only our cause, but the existence of an entire civilization up high. If we are to obtain answers and calm the questions in our hearts, we must speak with them. Only some will ascend to meet the mountain dwellers, for now, the rest should stay here while it is safe. Keep watch and only unpack what is necessary. I will send word with Silme when we arrive and have met their leaders. I depart now,” said the Elf King.
Valruin rushed to his father’s side anxiously, hoping that he would join the expedition to the top of the mountain. Camlhach joined him, but walked calmly, almost as if he did not want to be called upon.
“Camlhach, Lothar, and Turion, I will need you to accompany me,” said the king. “Valruin, you are to stay behind with our people and the queen; assist in all that you can. We must go now.”
It was as if a lightning bolt had struck him. Valruin could not believe his father’s rejection. His brother and friends would see the unknown civilization, perhaps he would too if all went well, but he had not been chosen among the first. He approached his father once Camlhach and the others had gone to prepare and spoke in confidence.
“Father,” said Valruin. “I understand that I must stay behind and help look after the others, but I truly wish to go. I need to go.”
Valruin spoke with frustration in his heart, not trying to sound too eager like a child begging for a sweet, but more like an adult that feels a true obligation to their beliefs. Thinidiel noticing his son’s uneasiness put his hand on his shoulder and looked into his eyes. They were so much like his own and he knew the passion that was inside, for he too had had it at his age.
“Your mother is very powerful, my son,” said Thinidiel. “But if anything should happen to your brother and I, you must be ready to face the storm. She will need you and our people will need you as well.”
“Is this because of what I did?” began Valruin with guilt in his voice. “Is this punishment because I killed him?”
Thinidiel’s face turned serious. “What you did can never be undone and though we have killed and fought in the past, we are here to start a new way of life. No bloodshed is what we swore, unless there is no choice.”
“He threatened Mother and Telwen,” interrupted Valruin heatedly. “I saw it in his eyes.”
“I know you did not mean any harm,” continued Thinidiel calmly but firmly. “But you must learn to obey.”
“Cam obeys,” replied Valruin under his breath with slight bitterness.
Thinidiel looked over at Camlhach before returning to Valruin.
“You are the youngest of my blood, Valruin, capable of leading an army, but you must learn that there is a time and place for everything and everyone, and right now it is your brother’s turn,” said the king looking for understanding in his son’s eyes. “Fate calls out to us all and when it is your time, you will answer.”
Valruin nodded and bowed, but it did not ease the hunger in his heart as he walked away.
Prince Camlhach approached the elflings. “Listen up, young Erathiel!” said Camlhach, almost addressing them as soldiers, but not in an entirely serious manner. “I have instructions for you to follow in my absence and the prince, princess and queen shall oversee that you follow them.”
A young Erathiel boy gulped loudly at the prince’s words, making Camlhach smile for second, but he soon returned to his serious role. “First, you must always remember to be careful and aware of your surroundings, you never know who can be hiding nearby. Second, always obey your elders no matter their instructions and lastly, never attempt to leave the cave or go exploring on your own.”
The elflings agreed but Enora, who was not really an elfling but had been playing with them, rolled her eyes at the prince and replied rather annoyed. “Aye, aye, we know,” she said finally meeting his eyes and not flinching for a second.
“Enora!” said her mother who stood nearby and had seen it all, rushing to her daughter’s side apologetically. “You must not treat the prince in that manner. Apologize.”
“Apologize?” said Enora with surprise, almost unaware of how rude she had been. “I have not insulted the prince and I am sure that if I had, he would have said so. What is more, I know exactly how to take care of myself; I have been doing it quite well for many years now, thank you.”
“Enora,” implored her mother softly. “The prince means no harm nor has he said that you are unable to take care of yourself. Apologize.”
Young Enora looked at her mother and then to the prince, his golden eyes fell upon hers with such kindness that it filled her with regret. Ever since the tragedy in the voyage, she had been feeling a bit on edge. There were faces that she remembered and wished she could see. She was glad, however, that her father had not been taken at sea, but in battle. Even though she did not look at the others’ death as shameful, she preferred to remember her father fighting till his last breath.
“Forgive me, Prince Camlhach, for my rude behavior,” said Enora without a drop of defiance, calming down. “I promise to never repeat such rudeness again.”
“It is fine, Enora. All is forgiven,” said the prince with a patient smile, understanding the change she had already begun. “Now, on your feet!” he said turning to the elflings. “We have a long way to go and before you know it, we shall be back from the mountain high and ready to part—so be sure to have everything packed and ready for our return. Be good in our absence, little ones.” The young elves rose to their feet and began to help with preparations, for they too believed that their prince would be triumphant and back soon from what seemed to them a most admirable quest.
Enora’s mother approached the prince with humble posture. She had the same golden hair as her daughter, but her eyes were a deep brown, whereas Enora’s were as blue as the sky, like her father’s. The loss of her husband had left her with great pain and she had been close to dying, but it was her daughter’s life that had helped her escape an almost inevitable death. Enora, too, had suffered and she feared that it had been the loss of her father that had awoken such a defying attitude in her.
“My deepest apologies, Prince Camlhach,” she began. “My poor Enora, I fear, at times has a fire that burns too bright. I will speak with her, prince.”
He calmed and thanked her for her words. “It is all well, Moiren. A fire that burns too bright can too have a promising future if given purpose and direction. Enora has a good heart and she is still very young,” he replied. “She reminds me of somebody who was much like her at her age,” he spoke a bit louder than a whisper.
Moiren replied as she bowed. “Aye, and may her light return to us again.”
Queen Nimtar stood outside looking at the mountain, focusing on finding the perfect spot. She pointed her staff at the mountain and drew magic from it—so as not to wear her own down—and carved from a distance, on the mountain wall, a staircase that grew till it got lost in the clouds. A stair would lighten their journey tremendously, should they proceed after a victorious meeting with those that dwelled above.
“A thousand steps up,” said Lothar under his breath, looking up. “Could not she have made wings grow out of our backs?”
“Worry not,” said Turion with a smirk. “If needed, I shall carry you.”
Lothar looked at Turion with a serious face while the latter beamed back at him with a mischievous smile.
“Never in a thousand years would I allow anyone to carry me,” said Lothar firmly.
Turion laughed and shook his head, his golden hair slightly covering half of his face for but only a second. “There may come a day when you might need to be carried, old friend.”
Lothar did not reply, he simply looked afar and up towards the clouds where the mountains pierced their cottony skin. He did not like to think about such a day coming to pass. He had lived for many years, seen many things, and even though he fought fearlessly in battle he was not ready to welcome death just yet. Being the only one of his kind, he did not know what his lifespan would be. But death would have to wait.
They said their goodbyes, but these were brief, for few were the ones that ventured to the mountain top and soon would they return with news of peace—or so they hoped. Camlhach looked at his brother and embraced him.
“Look after Tinwe while I’m gone. I know it might not be long, but you know how she is,” said Camlhach. They both looked at the mare, who was at their side, trying to share her concern by rubbing her nose on her master’s shoulder every once in awhile.
“I will, brother,” replied Valruin.
“I know you wanted to come,” started Camlhach with a worried tone. “I wanted you to as well.”
“Father says my place is here,” said Valruin with slight bitterness. “I must obey.”
Camlhach smiled at him and patted his shoulder. “We will be back soon, I promise,” he said as he turned away and joined the company.
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Saturday, November 18, 2017

The Battle of the Erathiel: Across the Enchanted Sea: Chapter 5: The Mountain

"He looks... human," said Valruin softly, his blood-stained sword dripping to his side.
Camlhach shook his head. "Aye, but he was not so a moment ago."
Thinidiel fixed his eyes on the young man, Silme sitting on his shoulder doing the same. His face turned serious as he kneeled to analyze the body, his eyes met Nimtar's. The queen also kneeled to look at the boy. "He must have been under some sort of spell," Thinidiel spoke almost whispering.
"His birth was not a wicked one. Now I see this," replied Nimtar as she ran her hands slowly over the body, not touching its skin. "He was corrupted over time, they all were; something very powerful must have changed their hearts." She stopped as she reached the boy's face and gently closed his eyes.
She looked at Thinidiel for a moment, the same thought crossing their minds.
"We must not leave him like this," said Nimtar, rising to her feet. "Regardless of their intentions, regardless of their actions, we must let his soul be at peace." Silver fire appeared on the tip of her staff. She lowered it only a few inches and as it touched the ground, the tongues of flame found their way to the body, setting him ablaze under the pale moonlight.
Thinidiel looked at his youngest son.
Night had fallen and the cave waited for them nearby. Queen Nimtar led the company towards the mountain where her sons had spotted it. She could see the entry of the cave now that they were almost there, but as they approached it she felt something was amiss. The cave was and was not there. Its outline and darkness were there, but as she placed her staff to test its depth, its contact with the mountain side echoed for all to hear.
A cruel trick, she thought. The Dark One's work, no doubt.
She took a few steps forward, just enough to place the tip of her staff against the mountain wall. She closed her eyes and wind began to move all around her—wrapping her in a transparent veil—and growing from where the staff had been placed, blossomed small carvings of vines. They spread and grew in silver light as they formed a two-sided door on the mountain wall, covering the darkness of the fake cave opening. Once it had fully formed, she twisted her staff as if it were a key. The doors opened.
At first, there was only darkness inside, but when she stepped in and lowered her staff, grass began to grow from it and spread at tremendous speed until it covered the entire cave floor. Small trees bearing fruit sprouted from the earth and flowers, too. The plants illuminated the cave, for they had light of their own. Many Erathiel, specially the dwarves and Telwen, gasped in awe at Queen Nimtar's magic, for they had not all seen what she could do in the days of old when there was good magic in the air. Some smiled and remembered those days.
"Follow me," she said raising her staff only a little, its light glowing as strong as moonlight, illuminating their path as they entered the cave.
Thinidiel was reminded of the old days and the power that she could wield. This new world had great magic in it, a magic that could help his people cross the land and build their new home, but he knew well that wielding magic always came with a price and that if one did not control it well, it consumed you. He only hoped that his Nimtar would not forget.
There was room for all in the cave, and their queen had made it so that silver trees grew, reaching up towards the beautiful starlit sky—there was an opening in the ceiling that let both starlight and moonlight in. It was a mere resemblance of the past, but a warm one in their hearts. Bazur and Nurunn beamed up at her, Nurunn with her hand over her mouth, covering a gasp, and Bazur's eyes wandering from corner to corner, admiring what she had done.
"May you rest and find nourishment within these walls," spoke the Queen to all. "The mountain has shared its magic with me, but not only that." She smiled, walking towards the center of the cave where the moonlight fell upon her. "Behold! The mountain's secret."
She touched the green grass with the tip of her staff and a stone fountain emerged from the ground. The water coming out of it pure and never-ending. A clamor of happiness filled the air. They had water at last. Yet they did not all rush to taste its sweetness, instead they waited for their leaders to speak.
"Come!" said Thinidiel as he made his way towards Nimtar. "Drink and eat, but rest well, for tomorrow we have a long journey ahead of us. Let us thank this mountain and our Queen, for giving us all a home tonight." All bowed before Nimtar and she in return also lowered her head gracefully in thanks.
They entered the cave to do as commanded—some with satchels and packs, others with their animals and wagons, there was room for all inside. The first thing they did was drink the heavenly water. Nimtar sealed the cave and continued to make it appear more and more like their old home. Thinidiel watched over his people, how they rested their weary feet on the soft cool grass and how they delighted in each other's company. It was a miracle that they still kept hope in their hearts. They even played their guitars and violins, their flutes and drums, with such merriness that it brought happiness to all around. Even though some of the songs had a melancholic tune, it was a pain and sadness that did not linger. The lost ship would come and with it their families.
The queen made her way to her husband's lonely spot. She bowed down before his feet and as she brushed her hand from the grass and towards his face, she made flowers and vines sprout to twist and tangle into a beautiful throne for him to sit upon. Thinidiel smiled and held her hand, waiting for her throne to complete. They sat together.
"Why did the stars make you so lovely?" he asked as he brought her closer, admiring her face, running his fingers through her raven hair.
"Just so I could match you," she replied softly, caressing his face.
Thinidiel shook his head. "You are far lovelier. I carry too many scars, for which I am thankful."
"I too carry them," she said now gently caressing the long scar that crossed his face.
"I know," he replied. Thinidiel's eyes wandered to where their two sons were. "Valruin..."
"Yes, tomorrow, my love," she spoke as she gently turned his face to look at her once more. "You know as well as I do that he regrets it. Let us rest and let tomorrow be another day."
Thinidiel nodded. Nimtar smiled as with the wave of her hand, more vines and plants began to grow around them, making a gazebo of many colors and light, with curtains of flowers separating them from those around. Thinidiel's silver eyes shone with happiness as he held her in a warm embrace and looked into her emerald eyes.
"Together in life," he said to her.
"Together in death," she responded as she gently placed her hands around the back of his neck.
The elf children sat around a mystical fire that emerged no smoke, only light and warmth, as an elder told tales of their ancestors' great deeds, their obstacles and how they had overcome them in the past. It made the elflings proud and hopeful for a brighter day. Telwen smiled, but there was sadness in her eyes. Sûlmen who was sitting next to her leaned in to whisper.
"Telwen, what is the matter?" she asked coyly.
"Nothing," began Telwen. She tried to look away from Sûlmen, but then again she had always been a wonderful listener and a dear friend. "Well, it is just that I wonder what tales they will tell of my people. There are none of us left, but me, and I probably won't do anything great with my life. It just makes me sad."
Sûlmen smiled sweetly and took her friend's hand. "You cannot be sure about your future, nor that you will have no great part in the forging of our new home. I have known you since you were a baby, Telwen, and I know that there is something special about you," said Sûlmen.
Telwen smiled back and remembered how amazing it was for her to know that her friends, who seemed not much older than her, had known her since birth. Who else that was alive knew her better than her friends and family? The Erathiel grew in such a strange manner. The moment they began to not feel as children was the moment they grew incredibly fast into adulthood. Sûlmen and Enora had already begun this process but it seemed that it had not separated them at all.
"Thank you, Sûlmen," replied Telwen, no longer with heavy eyes.
Close by, Valruin and Camlhach sat on the grass, leaning against a tree trunk, looking through the cave's enchanted ceiling to seize the stars with their eyes.
"They all look the same to me although I know they are not," said Valruin. "I've never truly cared much about their stories, just their light."
"A lot of things look the same to you," said Camlhach with a laugh but it faded as he saw a figure in the sky that made his heart sigh. "It won't be long till sunrise. I hope we do not come across our 'friends' again tomorrow."
"Friends?" scoffed Valruin. "I understand what you mean and I hope we do not, too. Mind you, I always enjoy a good fight, but it all seems so strange. Who were they and why did he turn human after I..."
"You did not mean to, brother," said Camlhach.
"I never should have unsheathed my sword. Why do I always find a way to make things worse?" said Valruin. He suddenly remembered sparing with his sister when they were little and accidentally cutting her in the process.
"You do not make things worse, Val," replied Camlhach looking over at him. "You just let your emotions rule over reason, at times."
"Father has not spoken to me," said Valruin looking over at the gazebo. "Waiting, not knowing what he will say, is torment."
"Father understands us far better than we do ourselves, as does Mother. He knows your heart, trust me on this," replied Camlhach reassuringly.
"I am sorry, truly," Valruin began, his silver eyes looking at the grass. "It is just this journey, this barren land, the storm--" he paused. "Will we ever find her?"
"I know we will or she will find us, most likely the latter," replied Camlhach with decision. "It'll be alright. Some things never change."
"Some things never should," Valruin looked at the stars until the sky grew dark and only dreams filled his mind.
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The Battle of the Erathiel: Across the Enchanted Sea: Chapter 4: The Dark One

They were a twisted hybrid looking species of human and reptile, with arms and legs that ended in sharp, clawed extremities, and a thick long tail protruded from their lower backs. They stood armed and armored on the path to the cave. Camlhach and Valruin stopped right in front of them, their shiny slitted eyes fixed on the princes.
“We mean you no harm,” spoke Camlhach, raising both hands for the lizard people to see. Silme flew back swiftly towards the Erathiel and sat on the prince’s shoulder, giving the lizards an ear-piercing screech.
“Your friend does not seem to think so,” uttered a short and stocky lizard. His voice was raspy and low, vibrating and slithering words into the air. Dark green scales covered his body and only in some parts did he bear armor, unlike the rest of his people who were more brown or yellow colored and taller than he. He eyed Silme with a curious smile, revealing sharp, needle-like teeth.
“Silme is an excellent judge of character,” responded Valruin crossly, to which the lizard laughed dryly, causing the rest of the lizard folk to join in. It was thanks to Silme that they could all understand each other, for his cry had magic in it and made all languages understandable to the company.
“A bird is only food to us, not a wise man,” the lizard replied, licking his lips with his forked tongue.
Valruin grimaced, but Camlhach gave him a discouraging look.
King Thinidiel finally reached them, his people close behind. Though the conversation had felt heavy and long, it had only taken him seconds to reach his sons. He dismounted and bowed before the lizard people, his manner tranquil and courteous. “Well met. I am Thinidiel, King of the Erathiel. These are my sons, Camlhach and Valruin. We come in peace and with the hope of finding a new home. We mean you no harm.”
The same lizard eyed Thinidiel from head to toe. He spoke out, but did not bow, “King? You? There is only one King and it is not you. Who invited you? Who gave you permission to invade our lands, False King?” He began to pace and crack his knuckles impatiently, his people hissing and fidgeting as well.
“We are not invading your lands,” clarified Thinidiel kindly. “We are only passing through until we can find land to live on, land that belongs to no one. Please, there is no need for us to quarrel. Let us pass; you need not see us ever again.”
“Everything belongs to our King, all of the land. Why would he share with you?” The lizard’s eyes fell from the people that were almost behind Thinidiel. A wicked smile crept across his face as he closed his eyes and listened to a short violent wind that suddenly came between them. When he opened his yellow eyes, the smile was wiped from his face.
“You are no King! There is only one King under the fire and darkness, and he wants you dead!” He drew his weapon, a crooked sword of dark blade, and pointed it at Thinidiel. The lizard people drew their blades also and looked ready to strike, hissing and slicing the air with malice.
Just when the princes were about to draw their weapons, their father raised his hand to stop them. He did not look at them, but instead spoke to the lizard leader once again, “Please, let us pass. No one needs to get hurt. You do not want to do this.”
“Oh, but I do,” replied the lizard with a wide, terrifying smile as his body tensed. He raised his crooked sword. “Attack!”
Thinidiel avoided the lizard’s attack, turning swiftly away from the blade and stepping aside with the greatest of ease. The lizard stumbled forward almost falling down from the strength of his blow. Thinidiel watched him silently, steadily as the scaly foe found his ground.
“Attack me, False King!” he demanded, brandishing his sword with ferocity.
Thinidiel did not move or answer, his cool silver eyes fixed on the heated reptile. The lizard plunged once again to strike him, his twisted blade aiming straight for Thinidiel’s chest. But instead of drawing his longsword and meeting his foe’s dark blade, he used his hands to immobilize him. He could hurt no one like this.
“Coward!” he hissed, struggling to break free.
Thinidiel’s eyes met the lizard’s and for the briefest second his squirming stopped as the Elven King spoke firmly, almost tenderly, “I will not have a bed of corpses be the foundation of our new home.” The lizard was paralyzed, but Thinidiel had loosened his grip.
Suddenly, he broke free and aimed his sword straight at Thinidiel. The Elven King moved effortlessly away from the blade and took a step back, ducking every now and then, in response to the lizard’s attacks. The small reptile seemed exhausted from his effort and the frustration behind his attacks seemed to tire him even more.
“Do you surrender, friend? Will you tell your people to stop?”
The lizard’s eyes fell on his people who like him had failed at making the elves fight. The Erathiel would evade their attacks and use the reptiles’ own strength against them to disarm them. His people, though agile and skilled, were not a match for the foreigners. It was not a sight he was proud of, it made his people look weak. The lizard’s calm expression vanished as he replied odiously, bearing his sharp teeth, “Never.”
Thinidiel’s jaw tightened and for a second his kind silver eyes turned grey as he replied, “So be it.” He let the lizard go and turned to his sons. “Come, we will not stop for this.”
Valruin looked at his father with surprise, whereas Camlhach agreed and signaled the company to continue.
“As you wish, Father,” said Camlhach.
The reptile stared at Thinidiel in disbelief as he walked away, “You will not turn away from me! Face me! Face me and fight me, coward!”
“Father,” spoke Valruin only loud enough for the King to hear him, “We cannot walk away from this. We must fight them.”
Thinidiel did not turn to face the lizard, but instead approached his son and spoke with decision, “Not all fights must shed blood, my son. Remember that.”
Valruin did not know what to reply, but his father’s words rang in his head.
Suddenly, the leader of the lizards cried out. The mantle of night had fallen and the moon was high in the sky. Something strange began to happen to the lizard people. They began to hiss loudly and spasm, falling to their knees, their bodies bending and cracking under the moonlight. The Erathiel grew worried and stopped as they saw how the lizards suffered, but as the reptiles’ bodies began to grow and gain a more muscular shape than before, their concern became another. The lizards stopped squirming. They rose to their feet, matching the elves in height, some even taller and wider than them. Their eyes had turned bright red.
“Now, False King,” chuckled the once small lizard that now stood taller than the Elven King, “you will fight me.” He raised his dark blade.
Thinidiel was quick and like a silver shadow drew his sheathed longsword as if it weighed no more than a leaf and raised it high to meet the giant lizard’s black one. He struck harder than the Elven King had expected, but the strength of his mighty blow did not shake him. He had faced stronger foes. He tried to strike the beast in points that would immobilize it, but the lizard did well defending himself.
Thinidiel jumped high into the air and flipped over the lizard’s head, striking the back of its skull hard. The lizard screamed and whipped his tail ferociously as the Elven King landed on his feet. It was thick and fast, but he managed to duck and roll before it got him. As he did this, he managed to strike part of the lizard’s back leg, causing him to limp. He had to stop him, but he would not kill if he could help it.
Just then, a small, semi-transparent ball of air passed over Thinidiel’s head, hitting a lizard that was running towards the Princes, straight in the chest. It opened its mouth to cry out, but the very force of the blow left it speechless as it fell to the ground. Thinidiel smiled as he saw Nimtar standing only a few steps behind him. She had not waited for an order, she did not have to. The Elven Queen raised her shining staff to the skies, shooting out a beam of light that spread across the desert, blinding the lizards as the company advanced.
A wild lizard attacked her. She struck it across the face and swept it clear off the ground as she manipulated the wind with her staff. The lizard was three times her size, but did not stand a fighting chance against her magic and strength. When it tried to stand once again, she hit the ground with the bottom of her staff to jump high into the air and fall hard on the lizard’s back, striking it with enough force to render it unconscious.
She made her way towards her husband and sons, Telwen running behind her with her two friends, Enora and Sûlmen. She was a furious and beautiful sight to behold as she struck the enemy with wind and staff, blocking and avoiding the lizards’ attacks, containing her inner fire. Telwen and her elven friends struck the reptiles with sheathed swords together, following the Queen’s steps. Once united, the three girls formed a circle, back to back.
“Look out, Telwen!” cried out Enora as she blocked a blow that went straight for her friend. She raised both her short swords, unsheathed them in seconds, and cut the scaly foe, but not deep enough to end its life. Her bright blue eyes passed quickly from the lizard to Queen Nimtar as she struck it in the head and it fell to the ground; the Queen did not say a word, but her eyes showed not amusement. Enora did not care she was the first to spill blood on the desert sand.
Telwen listened to her friend but did not look at her. One second of distraction could cost her life. It was strange, but she did not feel entirely threatened by the lizard folk. Perhaps it was because she was so well-guarded. Nevertheless, she kept her own and fought well against the lizards with the help of her friends.
Close by were Bazur and Nurunn. Each of them proudly fighting with axes, forged by their forefathers. Bazur would strike mighty blows while spinning his axe to hit even more targets and Nurunn would do so as well. Suddenly, Bazur lunged directly towards a scaly foe that had wrapped its tail around Nurunn’s feet and made her fall. He used one of the enemy’s unconscious bodies to gain higher ground as he jumped and hit its head with his mighty axe. Their skill was such that they did not kill the lizards with their strikes.
“Are you alright, Nurunn?” he asked as he helped her to his feet, her golden braids about her delicate face.
“Yes, don’t you worry about me!” she said with a smile as she charged towards the lizards bravely.
Bazur smiled while fighting off more lizard people. “That’s my wife you are fighting!” he shouted proudly, striking one enemy after another, “My wife!”
Valruin was riding his wolf as he fought the enemy. Faana pushed and flung lizards to the side as they made their way across the battlefield, though she did not kill a single one. Valruin, against his own wishes, struck the lizards without cutting them, but that did not stop him from jumping off Faana’s back and striking a lizard clear across the face, leaving it unconscious on the desert sand. Camlhach shot arrow after arrow, occasionally using his own bow to strike, as he rode on Tinwe’s back. She circled the enemy with valor in her heart as Camlhach managed to pin the lizards’ clothes to the ground, keeping them from getting up. They were not men, not elves, or like any foe they had encountered before. At times, they would blend with the sand and appear from behind to catch them off guard, but the elves’ reflexes were sharp.
Nearby, the mighty Lothar fought against the strong lizard people. He struck the enemy with bare hands, refusing to draw blade to fight. Their hides were rough and cold to the touch, but it did not cause him much trouble when he gripped them before rendering them unconscious. Turion fought near him and even in the face of danger, he would not desist from teasing him.
“We are proud, aren’t we?” said Turion to Lothar whilst fighting. “As daring as a rose’s thorns, sweet blossom.” He grinned as he punched a lizard across the face with no effort or regret whatsoever.
“I—am—not—a—blossom!” cried Lothar as he crushed two enemy skulls into each other. Turion, who had not refrained from his self-amusing mockery, paused to grant Lothar applause.
Though it was a battle, they had not much to fear, for much worse had they seen in their old home. Still, they could not let their guard down. It was not long before they had stopped all but one, whom King Thinidiel held at his mercy.
“It is over, my friend,” spoke the King calmly, “will you now desist?”
“Never!” choked the villain, though it was his squirming that caused this.
“You can retreat now. We do not need to fight,” said Thinidiel with patience in his voice. “Why did you attack us?”
“We answer only to the Dark One and his will,” replied the creature with a twisted smile, his eyes falling on Nimtar and then on Telwen. “We kill all that is bright and good.”
Valruin’s blood boiled as he followed the lizard’s eyes. He quickly drew his blade and held it against the lizard’s neck. “Who is your master? Who is the Dark One?”
Before the King or Queen could draw their son back, the villain let out a horrible laugh as he instantly shoved his neck deep into the prince’s blade. Valruin’s eyes widened as he met the lizard’s eyes. King Thinidiel looked at his son as he let the body down on the floor, slowly. It only took a few seconds for the lizard to stop moving, his blood stained the sand. Camlhach approached his brother, put his hand on his shoulder, and pulled him gently to his side.
Suddenly, the lizard’s face and skin no longer looked as before, it changed before their very eyes from scales to skin, from sharp teeth and claws, to hands and feet. The lizard was now a young man, dead before their eyes. The other lizards were gone.
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Monday, January 18, 2016

Book Review: "The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones" by Cassandra Clare

Hey guys!/Hola chicos y chicas!

It's been forever! Please don't kill me :O I've been trying to do a thousand things and they've all be working out fine, but they've taken up a lot of time. Good news are/Han pasado siglos! Por favor no me maten :O He estado trantando de hacer un millon de cosas y todas han resultado bien pero han consumido harto de mi tiempo. Buenas noticias:

  • My book's going great! Lots of editing and re-writing, but I not rushing it because I'm really happy with what I've changed :3 
Mi libro van super! Harto re-escribir y editar pero no estoy apurando el proceso porque estoy muy contenta con los cambios que estoy haciendo.
  • I'm working online, teaching English, so it's been great to work from home and I've time to keep my house nice, see friends, work on the book, videos, and some 'me' time. 
Estoy trabajando online enseñando Inglés así que ha sido genial trabajar desde mi hogar para mantener mi hogar lindo, ver amigos, trabajar en mi libro, preparar videos y tener tiempo para mi.
  • I started reviewing books and series on YouTube! I'm super excited about this and so far I've had really good responses :) I've attached my first review on a book called "The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones" by Cassandra Clare. A series of the book just came out, "Shadowhunters", so I thought it might be interesting to start out with that. It's on Netflix!
Empecé a criticar y analizar libros y series en YouTube! Estoy muy contenta con esto y hasta ahora he tenido muy buenas reaccioens :) Adjunté mi primer video de un libros llamado "Los Caza Sombras: Ciudad de Huesos" de Cassandra Clare. Una serial acaba de salir basada en el libro que se llama "Shadowhunters" así que pensé una buena idea analizar ese libro. Está disponible en Netflix!
  • I'm participating in an online book club so I've been reading and analyzing "Jane Eyre" like crazy, but also making vids about it :D 
Estoy participando en un club de lectura online así que he estado leyendo y analizando "Jane Eyre" como loca pero también haciendo videos del libro :D
  • All in all.. busy, but happy!
En resúmen, ocupada pero felíz!

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