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Saturday, January 31, 2015

Writing Till the Sun Comes Up!

Hello again! Hola otra vez!

How are ya? Made some adjustments to Chapter 11. I felt like something was missing and it turned out I was missing another character. Hope you enjoy what Thandir (yup, that's him!) is going to bring to the table ;)  By the way, anyone ready for Chapter 3? If you are just comment below :3 Have a great day!

Como están? Hice unos cambios al Capítulo 11. Faltaba algo y era un personaje nuevo. Espero que les guste lo que Thandir nos va a enseñar en este viaje ;) Listos para el Capítulo 3? Si lo están favor comentar abajo :3 que tengan un lindo día!

Friday, January 30, 2015

The Battle of the Erathiel: Chapter 2: The Mountain High

Chapter 2
The Mountain High
The Erathiel continued their journey with the first rays of dawn, walking by the seashore or as close to it as they could. They covered great distance for their feet were strong and their horses speedy. Silme flew ahead, ever searching and guiding all, although it had joined in battle it showed no sign of struggle on his silver wings. As the day pressed on, the desert began to stay behind and a new landscape began to appear, the Erathiel could see it from afar with their keen eyes. They would soon be rid of the harsh sun. However, the time for refuge had already come and the night was near, so they searched, but found no refuge near the sea. They had no other choice but to venture away from it and in towards the mountains once again. The elves had seen how great these were, but only when they were at its feet did they realize how magnanimous the mountains truly were, almost as if these had seemed smaller in the morning. The truth was that the mountain chain had elevated—would it be greater as they pressed on? Only time would tell.
The elves searched at its feet for shelter, but it was futile. Queen Nimtar, having felt a strong magic coming from the mountain chain, spoke, “It is the backbone of the world,” she closed her eyes and placed her hands facing the mountain as if warming her hands with fire, “Its energy courses from beginning to end. If we follow her, we will find our home.” She placed her staff once more against the mountain wall and made a refuge like the one before. Once it was ready, they went in: children, elders, wagons, there was room for all and once again had their queen made it so that grass grew inside and silver and golden trees as well, reaching up towards the beautiful starlit sky. It was a mere resemblance of the past, but a warm one for their hearts. Lord Thinidiel watched over his people, how they rested their weary feet on soft cool grass and how they delighted in each other’s company. It was a miracle that they still kept hope in their hearts. They played their guitars and violins, their flutes and drums, with such merriness that would bring happiness to all around. Even though some of their songs had a melancholic tune, it was a pain and sadness that did not linger. The lost ship would come and with it their families—a thought present in all their hearts.
The queen made her way to her husband’s lonely spot. She bowed down before his feet and, brushing her hand from the grass and towards his face, made flowers and vines sprout to tangle and twist into a beautiful throne for him to sit upon. Thinidiel, delighted in her magic and light, held her hand and waited for her throne to be complete so as to sit together. “Together in life,” said unto her, “Together in death,” she responded as he gently kissed her ivory hand. Their kin bowed before them as they took seat and with a hand over their hearts hailed and wished them an eternity of rule. What the next day would bring, they did not know. What evils they would face or what friends they would meet, they knew neither, but what was sure in their hearts was that they would follow their king and queen, their princes and princess, till the ends of the earth.
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The sun did rise again and the Erathiel slowly awakened to say farewell to their temporary home. Though the desert at sunrise was glorious, the nights were the most astounding in the world. The moon would fill the starlit sky and the ground would almost disappear from sight. Nowhere had they seen such clear and bright skies. The morning air sank in and the cold of night slowly went away. Thinidiel stood watch by the threshold as his queen tended to her garden and all life she had grown within the cave—many elf children helped and learned from her. The princes sat with a group enjoying breakfast, some elven bread and supplies from the voyage. They also had fresh grown fruits and vegetables that they had cultivated inside the cave and continued harvesting as they ate, for the queen’s magic had made them grow astonishingly fast.
Lothar, among the first ready to part, approached the king, bowed and spoke, “My king, we are almost completely prepared to part. Shall I press all to make haste? Is there anything that needs to be done?” King Thinidiel smiled at him before looking out to the desert and replying, “I fear we shall not part just now. I thank you for your help, Lothar, but Silme brings word that has changed our plans completely.” He had sent Silme out to scout and through his eyes had found something of great interest. “My king,” said Lothar in reply as he left him to his thoughts. Silme returned and the queen and her sons approached Thinidiel. They stood silent, awaiting reply. Silme sat on his master’s shoulder and Thinidiel seemed to be listening to him and only after a few seconds turned to his people. “My fellow Erathiel, it is as we suspected,” he began, “The life within this mountain has helped not only our cause, but others’ as well. There is a civilization living on this mountain high. If we are to obtain answers and calm the questions in our hearts then only they can help us. Camlhach, Lothar, Turion, I will need you to accompany me. Valruin, you are to stay behind with our people and queen; assist in all that you can. We depart now.”
The Erathiel wished good fortune to those chosen to rise to the mountain top, but Valruin felt a rush through his body as he realized that he would not be able to go. He approached his father and spoke in confidence, “Father, I understand that I must stay behind and look after the others, but I truly wish to go. May I?” he said with frustration in his heart, not trying to sound too eager like a child begging for a sweet, but more like an adult that feels a true obligation to their beliefs. Thinidiel noticing his son’s uneasiness put his hand on his shoulder and spoke, “Your mother is very powerful, my son, but if anything should happen to us or her, you must be prepared to face the storm,” he looked over at Camlhach before returning to his son, “You are the youngest of my children, capable of leading an army, but you must learn that there is a time for everything and right now it is your brother’s turn. Fate calls out to us and when it is your time, you will answer.” Valruin understood his father’s words even though they meant that he must stand aside in certain situations. He nodded and bowed in acceptance of his fate, but it did not ease the hunger in his heart as he walked away from him. Thinidiel watched him walk away, only slightly concerned, praying that time would teach his son and that envy would never enter his heart.
Meanwhile, prince Camlhach approached the children to instruct them on their duties, many of them looked up to him and his brother, but he had always been a sort of big brother to the young ones, “Listen up, young Erathiel! I have instructions for you to follow in my absence and the prince and queen shall oversee that you do,” one of the young swallowed hard at this, “You must remember to always be careful and aware of your surroundings. Always obey your elders,” the children agreed, but a young girl rolled her eyes at the prince and replied rather annoyed, “Aye, aye, we know.” She met the prince’s eye and did not flinch for a second, “Enora!” said her mother who stood nearby and had seen it all, “You must not treat the prince in that manner. Apologize, child!” Young Enora let out a sigh, looked at the prince and apologized with very little spirit, “Forgive me, prince Camlhach,” her mother pushed her on, “For… my rude behavior. I promise to never repeat it again.” The prince smiled as he replied, “It is fine Enora. All is forgiven. Now,” he said turning to the rest, “On your feet, we have a long way to go and before you know it, we’ll be back from the mountain high and ready to go. Be good in our absence, little ones.” The children rose to their feet and began to help with preparations, for they too believed that their prince would be triumphant and back soon from what seemed to them a most admirable quest. Enora’s mother approached the prince with humble posture, “My deepest apologies, prince Camlhach,” she began, “My poor Enora, I fear, at times has a fire that burns too bright. I will improve her behavior, prince. I will speak to her.” He calmed and thanked her for her kind words, “It is all well, Elwen. A fire that burns too bright can too have a promising future if given purpose and direction. Enora has a good heart and she is still a child,” he replied and gave a small sigh and spoke a bit louder than a whisper, “I too knew a little girl much like her.” Elwen replied as she bowed, “Aye, and may her light return to us again.”
While the Erathiel readied their supplies and spoke of who might live on top of the mountain, Queen Nimtar stood outside looking at it, focusing on finding the perfect spot for her people to climb. The mountain vibrated with life and she would use it to provide a safe journey towards the sky. She looked at Thinidiel as a sign that she had found a way. He gave the command for the chosen to be ready to journey and soon all were outside to see them part. The queen looked at her sons before she began placing each hand on one side of their faces, cupping them with tenderness—how she loved them, darkness and light. Retrieving her hands, she turned to face the mountain once again and drew magic from the mountain once more—so as not to wear her strength down—and with her staff in hand she carved on the mountain wall a staircase that grew till it got lost in the clouds. All were pleased and amazed, for a stair would lighten their journey—should all proceed after a victorious meeting with those that abode above—all but Lothar, who grumpily said under his breath, “A thousand steps up a staircase! My poor legs have seen too much.” Turion smiled beside him and replied, “Worry not, old one. If needed, I shall carry you the rest of the way. Light as a flower’s petals you must be.” Lothar looked at the young elf with such fury, but did nothing upon it, for he knew it was not the place or the time to quarrel, especially over so trivial a matter.
They said their goodbyes, but these were brief, for few were the ones that ventured to the mountain top and soon would they return with news of peace—or so they hoped. Camlhach looked at his brother, embraced him and said, “Look after Tinwe while I’m gone. I know it will not be long, but you know how she is,” they both looked at the mare, who was at their side, trying to share her worries by rubbing her nose on her master’s shoulder every once in a while. “I will, brother.” Camlhach smiled at Valruin’s response and said as he turned away, “Until we meet again, brother.” With that, they followed their king and began to walk the long steps of the endless stairs before them, Silme flying above, watching over their every step. The queen asked all to return to the cave for safety, should an enemy spot them, and only Valruin, Tinwe and Faana were the last to enter before she sealed it.
King Thinidiel led his fellowship on, the sun scorching at their backs. It did not wear them out as the steps would a mortal, but the road was long and tedious. Turion looked down every once in a while and his eyes could see as far as the coast. “No ships in sight,” he thought aloud, “No smile, no laughter, no beauty to behold: just silence and doubt.” Lothar walked on, dreading every step, looking out for the king and prince, he even thought of Turion as someone to be saved; he did not despise him, really. “All right, old man?” asked Turion, noticing that he had looked over his shoulder. King Thinidiel and Camlhach smiled as Lothar replied grumpily, “Yes, child. I am more than fine and I shall continue to be fine until the end of my days.” Turion replied with a small laugh, but spoke no more. They were almost at the top when Silme let out a cry. “They are aware of our presence,” said King Thinidiel with no fear or surprise, “They are prepared should our intentions be dark.” Camlhach gave a sigh, for he did not wish to battle and saw no reason to do so. He thought of the children and their safety, of all who depended on them, the weight was heavy on his shoulders, but did not mind it at all. Finally, they reached the top of the mountain and there to greet them stood many people, gathered around the strange staircase.
They were humans, but nothing like the ones they had known back home. These were small people, almost the same height as dwarves, with dark reddish, golden skin. Their eyes were very dark, but bright and did not look at all like warriors, but rather farmers or herders, they thought. One of them spoke, signaling with his arm at Thinidiel and then to the land. At that moment, they realized that they did not speak the same tongue. Nonetheless, Silme flew over them all and let out a song that allowed their ears to understand one another. “Who are you and why have you come here?” was what the man was saying. King Thinidiel immediately bowed, placing his right hand over his heart, his kin doing the same, “I am Thinidiel, King of the Erathiel. We have come in peace and in hope of guidance and friendship. We are new to this land.” Camlhach and his fellow elves realized how all the people had gathered, of all ages, looking at them with great surprise—some with wonder and others with suspicion. It was no doubt for the ‘guard’ in charge to have his reasons to question such tall and strange beings. The guard hesitated, but lowered his pointing stick replying, “If you come in peace then we shall help. You must honor what you have spoken. I am Quetua.” Thinidiel smiled kindly, “I will honor my words. We wish to speak to your leader, if that is possible. We look for allies, not enemies.” The guard gave the order and all the others lowered their weapons, which were not really dangerous for the Erathiel at all.
They followed the guard and wondered at such a strange city. The people all wore bright colors and woolen hats to block out the sun and guard against the cold at night. They had many fields of plants unknown to the Erathiel and they lived in homes made out of a substance they also had never used before. It was a beautiful land where water ran down from the mountain tops, which were covered in snow. Camlhach’s heart grew warm at such beauty and peace—there were no mountains in their old home, just small green hills and forests everywhere. The way these people lived surprised and marveled him. He also wondered how they had made it up, for surely they had not sprung from the earth as their crops. “How can life sustain itself up here?” he asked himself as he remembered the desert that remained below, “An oasis up high.” The people all turned to look at them as they approached a much larger structure, not in height, but it grew sideways beyond most of the common homes. It almost looked as if it were made of stones, but muddier. Perhaps it was as simple as that: mud with stones.
Lothar looked forward very seriously, trying to look strong and stern before the eyes of these people (while at the same time surveying them himself), until his eyes met those of a woman of the tribe. She looked very pretty to him with her golden skin and dark eyes—her hair was the shiniest jet black he had ever seen in his life—and she smiled coyly as if approving him, too. Suddenly, she dropped the vegetables in her basket, blushing as she parted her eyes from Lothar, but he immediately rushed over to help her, kneeling to gather her belongings, “Pardon, milady. I did not mean to startle you,” he apologized, believing that he had somehow frightened her by staring. The woman smiled at him once more and spoke with a voice that seemed full of joy and laughter, “It is fine, it is fine. Thank you for helping me.” Lothar thanked his stars for Silme’s gift, for hearing her voice and understanding her had truly felt like a gift from above. Before he could ask himself if it was appropriate at all—or if his kin was far away—he asked nervously, “May I know thy name, kind maiden?” The woman stood up slowly, not parting her eyes from Lothar, and pushing her hair behind her ears, “My name is Éteri,” she replied and started walking down a path, slowly enough for Lothar to follow her. “Éteri! What a beautiful name. If you do not mind my asking, but what meaning does it hold?” She giggled as some more women who passed behind her whispered, smiling—it really was an interesting sight with Lothar being so tall and Éteri so petite. “It means flower,” she replied sweetly. Lothar smiled, just gazing, before he realized that he had not given his name, “I’m sorry, lady Éteri. My name is Lothar.” Éteri paused and looked at him trying to imitate his pronunciation, “Lo-tar?” she tried repeating with a thick accent. “Lo-thar,” repeated Lothar patiently and sweetly, would anyone recognize him now? She focused and tried again with great effort, “Lothar.” He beamed at her, “Excellent! Wonderful!” He smiled nervously as he noticed he had in fact clapped his hands together in celebration of her achievement and felt a bit embarrassed by his enthusiasm. The woman blushed and smiled and gathered her courage to ask, “If I may ask, what does your name mean?” Lothar paused as she asked this, but decided to answer with the truth behind his name, “It means—.” “Lothar! Lothar, we cannot wait for you,” it was Turion who with a devilish smile called from quite afar. “How long?” thought Lothar to himself. The woman smiled gently and spoke, “I believe we must say goodbye, for now.” Lothar bowed before her and replied as their eyes met, “Just for now, lady Éteri. Until we meet again.”
“Until we meet again, Lothar,” she said as they parted ways.

He walked away feeling younger than ever, lighter, happier. Even Turion’s constant taunts could not bother him now. He quickly reached the rest, for he ran with great speed, carefully as to not embarrass himself further before Éteri. Prince Camlhach had also noticed his conversation with the woman and commented, “Seems you are appreciating the,” he paused, “Landscape?” Lothar’s face blushed. Turion also spoke, “Aye, but it also seemed the landscape was appreciating you.” His ears turned red, too.

Thursday, January 29, 2015

About Elves & the Erathiel/Acerca de los Elfos y los Erathiel

Morning! Buenos días!

Thought I'd shed some light on the concept of Elves that is used in my book. Pensé buena idea clarificar el tipo Elfo que ocupo dentro de mi libro.

My elves are no doubt inspired on J.R.R. Tolkien's elves, but with some differences. First of all, they're mythological beings born from Germanic and Scandinavian ancient lore. They're beings of a humanlike exterior but much greater in beauty, angel like. They are immortal and con only die if slain or from great sadness. Elves are known for their great connection with nature, which is much deeper than with humans, one may even say that nature is many times on their side and favors them. They are also greatly skilled in everything they do, whether it be crafting, fighting, singing you name it.

Sound a little too perfect? True, but in my book I  hope to give a whole new look into the hearts and minds of the Erathiel, my own race of elves.  Attached you will find a link that explains the origin of elves in different cultures. If you're into history and such things, it's quite interesting to read :)

Mis elfos están inspirados en los de J.R.R. Tolkien pero tienen sus diferencias. Primero que todo el origen de los elfos deriva de la cultura Germánica y Escandinava. Son  de un exterior similar a la de los humanos pero con una belleza extraordinaria. Son inmortales pero pueden perecer en combate y también por gran dolor emocional (pena). Los elfos con conocidos por su gran conexión con la naturaleza, que es un lazo mas profundo que con los humanos. Uno podría decir que la misma naturaleza les tiene un cariño especial y les ayuda. También muestran gran destreza en todo lo que hacen: canto, combate, de todo.

Suenan muy perfectos? Si pero en mi libro espero darle otra mirada a la vida de los elfos, mas que nada a la raza de los Erathiel, la cual yo inventé. El link que agrego es por si les interesa este tema de los elfos y gustarían leer un poco de sus origines. Está bien interesante :)

About Elves (English)
Acerca de los Elfos (Español)

Wednesday, January 28, 2015

The Battle of the Erathiel: Chapter 1: The Desert of Aguah

Chapter 1
The Desert of Aguah
Across the sparkling Enchanted Sea sailed a gray ship whose white sails shone like flames of pure light. Its stature and beauty was far too great and seldom seen by the eyes of mortals. Beautiful and sad were those who sailed upon it, bright were their eyes and their locks of silver and gold long. The company was of elves who belonged to an ancient kin known as the Erathiel. They were greatly known in their lands as elf-warriors of quick judgment and, as many of the elven kind, wise and long lived. It was only when the first lights of evening were being gently kindled upon the land that the ship came to the harbor; grand but overlooked by those who built it. Who had built the harbor was a complete mystery for those who sailed and arrived at its care. It had been heard that near the ends of the world there was a new land, wild and untamed, so surely it must have inhabitants, they thought. Many had braved the sea’s might and perished seeking for this new land for a promise of a brighter path, but there were always some that the Lord of the Sea found worthy and allowed to pass, almost always at a price. The Erathiel were skilled sailors, but the journey had been rough and the Lord of the Sea had claimed more than one life.
On the mast of the ship sat a silver bird who scouted above and below—its eyes were a penetrating black. It surveyed the land without movement but with the patience that only those of many lifetimes show; a symbol of beauty and stealth. Two elves cloaked in gray, each with a thin rope in their hands, tied one end to the ship and the other to the harbor. To the untrained eye the rope might seem easy to cut or break, but having been made with the warrior hands of the Erathiel it could have survived a tempest. Their eyes looked to the land they had come to and only confusion could be found in those deep pools of light. The idea of this new land had not been of a deserted one but of one where they could begin anew, where they could cultivate their home once more. A significantly tall elf with the build of a warrior, dressed in shades of grey and green, stepped onto the deck. His eyes fell on the two that had tied the ship to the harbor and he thanked them with a gentle nod. His name was Thinidiel, Lord of the Erathiel, keeper of their ancient ways. He had led them into battle a thousand lifetimes and saved them from death just as well. He had also led them on this voyage, this search for a new home, not to wander or be lost at sea, but to search for what they had lost and needed to have once more.
He looked to the mast where the silver bird kept watch and like a swift cloud he came down and sat on Thinidiel’s shoulder—the bird’s wings and its master’s hair the same bright silver light. He seemed to shrink down to a more domesticated size as he sat on his master’s shoulder. “Silme,” said Thinidiel gently to the bird as he pulled out from a hidden pocket a treat to feed him. Silme gave a gentle bow before accepting the treat and remained on Thinidiel’s shoulder. Thinidiel looked away from the ship to this new deserted land and with slight disappointment spoke, “Far have we strayed from that which we had hoped to find, my friend.” Silme looked into his eyes as if trying to give him comfort, for it had not been a pleasant journey. Just as they had thought it was near its end, they were struck by a terrible storm that took the life of many Erathiel, for it had not been only one ship that had sailed to find a new world but three. The wind and the waves, the lightning and rain, had separated them. Some lost their lives before the ships had fallen, but some as they were torn apart. More than one Erathiel questioned themselves as to why the Lord of the Sea did not claim their lives and why it took their brothers and sisters’ with such cruelty. He walked past his kin, greeting all with what energy he could muster. At times he would look away into the sea with a glimmer of hope in his silver eyes. It was choice that saved their lives and their ship: the choice of the Erathiel and the choice of the Sea.
There were still many inside the ship, both elves and animals, mainly horses, tamed wolves, and some hunting birds, and they all descended while looking about the land, the vast and empty land. Alas, among the animals arose a majestic white she-wolf, great in size and elegant with each and every step it took, and behind it appeared two warrior elves, carrying no cloak or jewel of any kind, though the fashion of their attire and the confidence with which they carried themselves clearly reflected their heritage. They were Beleg Camlhach and Beleg Valruin, princes amongst the Erathiel, the first a great archer warrior carrying his bow and quiver firmly across his back, his golden hair and eyes bright under the sun and the second was the mighty master of swords and daggers, whose attire concealed many a blade in places where they could bring him no harm, his silver eyes and dark hair contrasted strongly next to his brother so fair. There was not a single battle they had not fought together or where they had lost; they were their people’s pride, though they had always been a trio before the storm.  
Prince Camlhach had his hand around a gentle rope that was tied to the neck of a fine mare, black as night and as bright as the stars above it. This was Tinwe, his animal spirit and a brave companion through his many years. The great white she-wolf rushed to Valruin’s side and affectionately rubbed its snout into his chest, “Faana! Peace, peace. It has only been a few minutes since we last met. Peace, girl.” Faana relaxed at its master’s touch and looked out across the vast desert, letting out a small whine of complaint. “Oh, Faana,” sighed Valruin, “There is no grass to rest beneath you, nor tree to give thee shade.” Tinwe, Camlhach’s mare, nibbled its master’s shoulder gently as if trying to show support for it had no words to give. Camlhach sighed and spoke as he stepped off the ship with Tinwe at his side, “Well, if this is to be our home, I shall require lighter attire.” Valruin uttered the first laugh since their arrival in reply to his brother, strong and youthful like in his homeland, “And what would you require for this new attire, your highness? As you can see there is not even a leaf to hide your pale skin.” Camlhach smiled and pulled out an apple from his satchel to feed to Tinwe, he looked away into the vast nothingness surrounding him and said, “There’s bound to be a leaf somewhere out there and you’d better search; otherwise, you’ll have to see far too much pale skin for your own sake!” At the sound of this, more than a single elf uncovered a laugh, or a giggle, for the princes were known to have lightness of feet, but also of heart. Always a team in every deed as they attacked with such unity and might, that none had ever survived before their blade and arrow. Of course, it was also Tinwe and Faana who had helped them on their triumphant quests. Valruin made a disapproving glare, “Mind you words, Camlhach. We do not wish to stir a fair maiden’s heart, now.” His brother smiled, knowing that Valruin’s comment was not at all as serious as his face showed. Yet, he paused for a second, biting his lower lip as he looked back to the sea in thought. Valruin saw the look in his eyes, the longing, and quickly looked away.  
Thinidiel looked at his sons with a smile, for he admired their youth and light spirit, a trait not so common among the elven kind, and soon his eyes met that which was the loveliest of sights in the world. There, on the deck, cloaked in pure white clothes and sparkling stars, stood his wife and queen, Tin Nimtar. She smiled at him, as if no harm had fallen upon them, no loss, and she made her way across the ship and out to the harbor, a beacon of hope as she passed by all Erathiel, illuminating their hearts as she held out her hands towards them, healing them with her ancient magic to give them strength and to take away their tears and pain. Her raven mantle moved gently with the hot desert wind, a dark and beautiful color uncommon amongst the Erathiel, for she had not been born among them. Her origin was known only to the keeper of her heart and he had unveiled it to no one. “My lord,” she began with the gentlest of voices, “So this is where you escaped to. I could not find you anywhere this morning,” they shared a gentle kiss as their sons stepped out to explore the land. “Forgive me, my queen, for I had to be present at the landing of our ship, but worry not, for with your healing touch I am well and hopeful.” She smiled as youthful as ever and looked at her sons entertain themselves with their pets, what joy they brought to her heart. “Our sons look well,” she said with a gentle smile, “It seems as if the healing has already begun.” Thinidiel’s eyes darkened with uncertainty, “It seems so, but how can that be so?” Nimtar’s emerald eyes met with her husband, “It must be so. That or perish,” she paused only to touch his face, “You know that a broken heart is not something that I can mend, my love. Cry, as I have cried, but weep no more. I have yet to study the visions of the future, but one thing I truly know.” Thinidiel looked at her almost timidly, “And what is that, my queen?” She whispered back, “That nothing is ever truly lost if it wants to be found.” With that the king kissed his wife’s hand gently and felt the strength to face his people, some had been walking about either with their animal or animal spirit, but they were close to the ship. Taking his wife by the hand, lord Thinidiel addressed his people, “My warriors, my children, my friends, be not fooled by this dry land, for beyond this desert vast we shall find our home. I know your hearts and the sorrow that lurks within for it is also my own, but I ask you to put aside the pain and to honor the fallen by giving them a home their spirits may visit though they are far, but not gone.” To this did the Erathiel agree with cheers and nods, and queen Nimtar finished her husband’s thought, “Gather your belongings, prepare the horses and provisions for we shall cross this desert and find shelter by nightfall.”
It only took moments for the elves to assemble their wagons and have their caravan ready, and without any further instruction, they all set out, following Silme, who as a silver mantle shone under the bright sun as its rays came down harsh on the Erathiel, and harsh was the sand against their faces that the wind so cruelly lifted against their eyes. They had only heard of such a thing—a desert—in tales, of its beauty and cruelty, but never before had they seen such emptiness with brown colored sand. Prince Valruin looked at his brother calmly cross the desert, sometimes riding Tinwe, and at other times not, but his Faana’s thick coat did not sit well with the sun’s strength, so her tongue hung dry and shared his water with her, so that she could withstand the heat, “Come now, Faana. It won’t be long till nightfall and then the night will be yours. Now walk,” she licked the last tongueful from her master’s hands and continued journeying.
Camlhach walked ahead with Silme circling above him, scouting the land, and Thinidiel’s eyes did not abandon him, for though the prince was mighty he was still his son. “Camlhach, what lies ahead?” “Only sand and dust, my lord,” he replied sliding down from a small sand dune, Silme behind him. Behind the king walked another group of elves and among them an elder, as hard and tall as a mountain, spoke with a sigh, “This wretched sun! It’ll make my skin look like a dwarf’s.” With this, more than one elf joined in laughter and then Turion, an elf of sturdy build but light of feet,  answered, “It would suit you well, you greedy little blossom,” at this many giggled and others held their tongues for his name meant none other than ‘noble blossom’ in elven. “Lothar, you fool! Lothar is my name and it would do you well to remember that there is nothing about me that is as delicate as a flower,” replied the elderly elf with anger. Turion laughed once more and replied, “Nay, I would have a flower’s name if I were a fool.” This only infuriated Lothar further and he wrestled with Turion as the rest watched, entertained by their tomfoolery. Queen Nimtar’s eyes looked far away from the others, and Thinidiel noticing this approached her wagon, sat beside her and waited till she spoke. “This new land is new, full of magic and power,” she paused, “I can feel it as I walk into it.” Thinidiel held her hand, “Nothing to be concerned about, my queen?” She did not look at him, for a while as if she were listening to a distant voice and was suddenly brought back down to earth, “We have yet to see, my king. For now it would be best to be on guard, for I fear this power might be too great.” Thinidiel’s eyes seemed to flash for a second as he nodded and abandoned the wagon and made his way to the front, towards his sons who had bravely been leading most of the expedition down the desert.
Nightfall was nigh and so far nothing had stopped their pilgrimage. Valruin looked around and Camlhach with him till they found a cave not far from where they stood and Silme went out to inspect it. “A cave!” cried Camlhach, “There is a cave not far from here. We can set camp there.” Valruin used his keen eye to measure the landscape, “It is far enough from the sea to not be bothered by the tide and not too far in to be at the desert’s mercy.” Thinidiel nodded and replied, “Then we shall rest there,” though they were not truly and completely tired, but needed to rest their minds as most elves do, “Let’s walk on.” Valruin smiled with a spark in his eyes as he jumped on Faana’s back and raced his way over to the cave, a ghostly shadow moving over the sand. Camlhach cried out, “Cheat!” as he mounted Tinwe to catch up with him, “You only do this because you know I’ll reach it first,” he continued. “Nonsense,” cried Valruin as Faana galloped her way towards the cave, “I only cease opportunity when presented before me.” The rest followed and as the king did on horseback he noticed Silme had not returned. Something didn’t feel right. Queen Nimtar sat up alert, closed her eyes and cried out to her sons, “Valruin! Camlhach! Halt!” but before she could stop them, a dark cloud fell before them, as if it birthed from the sky and ground, and from it emerged creatures, wild and vicious. The Erathiel drew sword and arrow to defend the princes as they began to attack. The princes braced themselves for battle in seconds and were soon falling upon what seemed to be the enemy. Faana ripped all she could to pieces as Valruin pulled out his daggers from his sides, slashing into his enemies like a tempest of flashes of silver light, jumping off his wolf’s back as he landed flat on top of the creature’s chest, killing it with a single strike. Camlhach shot arrow after arrow, occasionally using his own bow to strike, as he rode on Tinwe’s back, she circled the enemy with valor in her heart as Camlhach pierced the enemy’s hide. They were not men, not elves, or like any foe they had once encountered. Their skin was covered in scales and their faces deformed with yellow eyes and sharp teeth. At times they would blend with the sand and appear right behind the Erathiel, but their reflexes were also fierce.
Silme stroke from above fiercely as a silver shadow of death; twisting and turning, shaping and reshaping into the smallest bird in sight and into a large silver cloud that covered the sky, wrapping up the enemy in a cloud of silver fire. Queen Nimtar descended from the wagon as a cloud of silver and might, and appeared before the scale-skinned foes, setting them on fire, freezing an electrifying their flesh, striking them with her staff, her husband at her side destroying the enemy with the strongest of blows. She was a furious and beautiful sight to behold. King Thinidiel held in his hand a great longsword that shone with a white light and pierced through the enemy’s skin, not allowing their wounds to heal, for it had the magic of his queen. His height and strength enabled him the most catastrophic blows of all.
It was a thing most amazing to behold, for the Erathiel are as mighty as they are artistic in their fighting, though amongst most elves seen as too passionate in their style. The mighty Lothar, who actually did resemble a dwarf in fighting spirit, struck the enemy with bare hands, cracking back and neck and refusing to draw blade to fight. “We are proud, aren’t we?” said Turion to Lothar whilst he fought, “As daring as a rose’s thorns, sweet Loth,” he said while he finished slicing off a head with no effort or regret whatsoever. Lothar raged at this mockery, which only led him to carry on with no weapon, save his limbs, to defeat foe after foe, “I-am-not-a-fl-ow-er!” cried Lothar as he crushed two enemy skulls into each other, receiving a small gesture of clapping from Turion who had not refrained from his self-amusing mockery. Though it was a battle, they had nothing to fear, for much worse had they seen in their old home. Still, they could not let their guard down and a good fight won was always appreciated. Soon, they had eliminated all but one, whom king Thinidiel held at his mercy, “Who are you? Why did you attack us?” he asked with authority. “We serve only the Dark One,” choked the villain, “We kill all that is bright and,” he paused as he looked over to the elven queen, “good.” Thinidiel’s blood boiled and he asked with a blade at his scaly neck, “Who is your master? Who is the Dark One?” The villain let out a horrible laugh as he shoved the blade deep into his neck before the king could stop him.
They let the body hit the ground and when they looked upon the fallen they saw that their faces and skin no longer looked as they did before, for they appeared as gentle as human or an elf’s face. Their hair, skin and eyes were all of different and beautiful colors and they no longer seemed wicked, but forsaken by whatever madness had possessed them. It brought a little sadness into their hearts, but only the queen knew that death was their only cure, for such conviction was driven by a force too strong. “They look as you and I,” said Valruin as he approached the bodies with Faana at his side. Camlhach shook his head, “Aye, but they were not so, but a moment ago.” Lord Thinidiel put his blade away as Silme lowered to sit on his shoulder. He fixed his eyes on the last that drew breath, his face most serious as he spoke almost as a whisper, “They were possessed.” The queen lowered herself to look upon the same eyes as her husband’s, for the villain had become a boy, just entering adulthood, “Their birth was not a wicked one. These children were all corrupted in time; something very powerful changed their hearts,” she spoke no more and closed the boy’s eyes with fear in her heart. “We must not leave them like this,” she said. Some Erathiel that had been wounded looked at her in surprise, but not in contradiction. “Regardless their intentions, regardless their actions, we must let their souls be at peace. They were children, lost children.” Thinidiel agreed with his wife and replied to all, “Our queen is right. We must burn their bodies so that they return to their land. We can all forgive these,” he paused for a second as he saw a small red-haired girl looking towards the sky, “children.” He closed her eyes gently, whispered something and looked to his wife. She let silver fire appear in her staff, raised it only a few inches, and as it touched the ground the silver tongues of flame found their way to the fallen, setting them ablaze under the pale moonlight.
Night had fallen and the cave awaited them not far away. It was then when something seemed to appear before them; a mountain that had been there the entire time, but only now appeared. Had it been the moonlight or something about the fight, they never knew, but it appeared. The mountain was tall, majestic, and a chain that continued down the land as far as the eye could see. Queen Nimtar walked towards it with staff in hand and as they reached it she traced an entry with the tip of her staff and these became doors. Before opening it she placed the staff at the center of it and whispered something in the dark. A small wave of sound was given off the tip and the doors opened. As they did, the Erathiel found that it was more than just a cave inside. She had made a place to rest where little by little grass began to grow inside, trees, fireflies, and all sorts of plant life that twisted and turned to give them places to sit and rest, illuminating the cave with little lights of their own, for their plants from home all held light. Queen Nimtar sealed its doors with her magic to protect all inside and continued to make it so that it appeared like their home. The elf children sat around a mystical fire that had no smoke, only light and warmth, as an elder told tales of their ancestors’ great deeds, their obstacles and how they had overcome them in the past. It made the children proud and hopeful for a bright day.
Valruin and Camlhach sat on the grass their mother had grown and leaned against a tree trunk to look through the cave’s enchanted ceiling to seize the stars with their eyes. “They all look the same to me, although I know they are not,” said Valruin. “A lot of things look the same to you,” said Camlhach with a laugh but it faded as he saw a figure in the sky that made his heart sigh. “It won’t be long till sunrise,” he continued, “And something tells me we’ll make new friends again.” Valruin scoffed, “Friends? Honestly, brother, but I understand what you mean and I also think so. I just hope not so young again,” he said remembering having sparred with his little sister and accidently cutting her in the process. They were both silent, lost in the same memories, both holding the same fear in their hearts. They had walked near the sea all day and not a single ship had been in sight; they both knew each other’s minds. “It’ll be alright,” said Camlhach looking at his brother, “some things never change.” Valruin smiled and looked at the stars until the sky grew dark and only dreams filled the sky.

I'm Back!

Hello everyone!

First of all, so sorry for not being online or posting in such a long time. 2014 overwhelmed me a bit, but I think I'm getting the hang of things so I should be able to keep up with my everything now!

Second, I have some great piece of news. I've been working on a book (the idea originates from another project from when I was in High School) and it's just been pouring out of  me! It's called, so far, "The Battle of the Erathiel" and it's a Fantasy adventure book with elves, sorcerers, battles, discovery, sailing, you name it! It's inspired on Tolkien's definition of what elves are like, but I created my own race called the "Erathiel", which I hope will show a different side to these 'perfect' beings.

So, this book's halfway and a little more done, which is the first of a very long story. Once it's completely been edited and reviewed, I'll let you know when and how you can purchase it (paperback, hardback, eBook).

Lastly, as a little gift and since by publishing it, having it in my computer, and so so so much evidence that it is MY original work, I've decided to share Chapter 1 with you for free! I might post it all at once or little by little. You will know right after this post.

Thanks for reading and hope you love it :D

Hugs,

Constanza Mayer